Zytemarre's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Electric Rat MKII]

B work

I like the style u made it in. The feet lol, to be exact with the feet. It looks like it's standing on hoofs. The original raichu just has a regular rodent's feet, just oversized a bit, so it stands on more than just the tip of the feet. Good job. Keep it up.

Kinsei responds:

I see what you and the others mean.
Raichu kind of had like long rodent/bunny feet, I'll definitely have to fix this if I draw him again.

[stone cold]

B+ work

Hey nice work. U made the focus drop dead on her. She stands out like a plasma screen surrounded by regular thick t.v's. It's missing one thing though. It needs a random flash here or there, coming from the paparazzi, at least to show how she's being lighted. Great job. Keep it up.

jagondudo responds:

yes i thought about that for the effect but given who the character is the camera men have been turned to stone. :S but thanks

[Loicizua Story Ver.]

C+ work

Next time try adding the text, explaining wut the character is at the "Author's Comments" section. It gives more room for the drawing. The creativity on her is good. All that's left to fix, well i think so, is the lower stomach. She looks like she's pregnant, unless she is supposed to be? Good job. Keep it up.

SYRSA responds:

Many of my alien girls have big intestines, such as Locuans and Lytvyrians. they're not pregnant.

[apocalypse chow!]

B+ work

Nice. The style looks like if it was out of a comic strip. The story u gave it sounds like its a god of some sort. I knew that nicolas cage was up to something. Good job. Keep it up.

jouste responds:

thanks for the B+!

[The Begining]

B+ work here

Nice. I want to learn how to paint with anything besides color pencils, pens, and pencils. I notice there is an arrow shape figure or a triangle a little b4 the waterfall on the right ends. Is that supposed to be something or wut? I just noticed that when im not told to look for something, i find things, and when i am told to find something, i dont find things. Great job. Keep it up.

MysticSkillz responds:

That's my watermark.

[Shaymin Salad]

C+ work

Kool joke. I too have not seen the movie, but im familiar with "Shaymin" and "Giratina." I dont know this "zero" guy, but does he really have his hands like that in the movie? or did u just skip the hands part? Good job. Keep it up.

Zelldoom responds:

I Usually prefer 3 finger hands, you will almost see all people i make with just 3 fingers, because i have made my own style of drawing. I really recomment you to see the movie. :)

[Etna WHOA]

A work here

Ok so im not rating this bc its naughty. I'm rating it bc u did an excellent job on the censoring. U creatively applied "30,000," covering her package. Then u gave her a long twirling tail that ends up covering her lower package. I don't know wut it is about that blurry penguin on the lower left, but i think it adds more to the look the girl leaves on many faces. Hey and don't think i didn't notice the boots! The boots with the smile. Now i don't know how comfertable it is to be in the nude with shoes but i think i've seen that around. Excellent job.

knockwurst responds:

hahahaha, well thanks I'm glad you can appreciate my humor style, and the penguins : )

[Chibi trade on DA]

B+ work here

Kool. Everything looks good...except for the head. The emphasizes on heads are kool now-a-days, but her head is a lil "too" emphasized. Other than that, everything is good. U should remake or add color to it, it might look better. Great job. Keep it up.

bloominglove responds:

Thank you~! This my style of how I draw my chibis. I draw my chibis with their heads a bit bigger then normal and their bodies a bit more realistic... Instead of short and chubby... (and fingerless/ footless...)

[For Tyra]

C+ work

Kool. Interesting picture. I might be able to tell wut it signifies. The robot is yourself, showing an appeal to the woman in the ghost like lower body. The woman outside the picture is your girlfriend. Being outside the picture resembles that u both are from different "planets" (not really, but same case as venus and mars.) Correct me if im wrong but i just thought i should make an observation to the meaning. It will b very funny if it didn't hav a meaning hahahah!

SuReeL responds:

You are spot on my friend! I made this for my girlfriend, and it was highly inspired by my emotions for her. Thank you for the rating and comment!

[Suida]

B work here

Most is good here. This is some good work. I wish i could draw people. (not like how she is shaped, but in the style. I draw more realistic) Wut's up with her face expression? There's nothing below her. She looks like she's scared or something. Other than the face, all is a good job! Look for my stuff, i'll try to submit within the next 5 days.

Vortex00 responds:

I draw mostly stuff like this, but I am able to draw a little bit of everything. I actually started off drawing more realistic stuff.

She is scared of the idea that she could possibly be in the picture with her breasts poping out. The idea of what's happening in this picture is she was initially posing for some pinup picture, but right as the picture was taken she had realized that the bunny suit isn't going to be covering her nipples for much longer, and that caused her focus on that as opposed to looking at the camera for the pose. And thus, technically, ruining the shot.

The whole sudden "unexpected surprise" thing is pretty hard for me to capture though. You have to make the drawing in a way that the the viewer can tell what the character was doing right before what they are currently seen doing.