Zytemarre's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[G.I.R]

B+ work

Ah if it isn't the lil lovable robot "GIR." A favourate to thousands including myself. I recently drew this guy too. I do think the hood is a lil too big and the theres too much shading going on. Otherthan that its good. Good job. Keep it up.

[Xochiquetzal]

A work

Nice. It looks like a cross of "Mucha Lucha" (a saturday cartoon i used to watch when i was younger) and "The Simpsons" (i dont think i need to explain wut this cartoon is) It is weird that she was named the goddess of household arts though, but i guess it does make sense since most household arts are trendy.

[Pepito and Juan]

B+ work here

Ur the first person iv'e seen here to be submitting spanish art work. Im starting to feel a lil more comfortable in this place now. The aztec calendar in the back is nice. I did one in high school but it didnt come close to how good urs is.

[Quetzalcoatl]

A work

Nice. I wish i could draw figures in a graffiti format. I can only do words lol. So this is quetzalcoatl, i think. U brought the interest of my history back into my head. Very inspiring. Excellent job. Keep it up.

[mega man x]

B work

Same as last guy, something about chest plate but enough about that. The backgrounds effect is perfect. It makes it look like something right out of a magazine cover or some sort. I noticed ur name. It stood out. It seems that u know ur history on the (aztec or mayan) culture. If im correct, Quetzalcoatl is either a god or someone that witnessed one of the gods. Good work. Keep it up.

[Tharevon]

B work

Ok first i though the being was colorless, but i noticed the white spots around the neck and head area. I notice some random triangles around it. (wuts that about) The games, i can't really think of any, but i really want that cookie. The pose he has says something about am organized civilization or thats the best u could draw him. The clothes most likely a war game. Good job. Keep it up, except with the random triangles.

[Etna WHOA]

A work here

Ok so im not rating this bc its naughty. I'm rating it bc u did an excellent job on the censoring. U creatively applied "30,000," covering her package. Then u gave her a long twirling tail that ends up covering her lower package. I don't know wut it is about that blurry penguin on the lower left, but i think it adds more to the look the girl leaves on many faces. Hey and don't think i didn't notice the boots! The boots with the smile. Now i don't know how comfertable it is to be in the nude with shoes but i think i've seen that around. Excellent job.

knockwurst responds:

hahahaha, well thanks I'm glad you can appreciate my humor style, and the penguins : )

[Chibi trade on DA]

B+ work here

Kool. Everything looks good...except for the head. The emphasizes on heads are kool now-a-days, but her head is a lil "too" emphasized. Other than that, everything is good. U should remake or add color to it, it might look better. Great job. Keep it up.

bloominglove responds:

Thank you~! This my style of how I draw my chibis. I draw my chibis with their heads a bit bigger then normal and their bodies a bit more realistic... Instead of short and chubby... (and fingerless/ footless...)

[For Tyra]

C+ work

Kool. Interesting picture. I might be able to tell wut it signifies. The robot is yourself, showing an appeal to the woman in the ghost like lower body. The woman outside the picture is your girlfriend. Being outside the picture resembles that u both are from different "planets" (not really, but same case as venus and mars.) Correct me if im wrong but i just thought i should make an observation to the meaning. It will b very funny if it didn't hav a meaning hahahah!

SuReeL responds:

You are spot on my friend! I made this for my girlfriend, and it was highly inspired by my emotions for her. Thank you for the rating and comment!

[Suida]

B work here

Most is good here. This is some good work. I wish i could draw people. (not like how she is shaped, but in the style. I draw more realistic) Wut's up with her face expression? There's nothing below her. She looks like she's scared or something. Other than the face, all is a good job! Look for my stuff, i'll try to submit within the next 5 days.

Vortex00 responds:

I draw mostly stuff like this, but I am able to draw a little bit of everything. I actually started off drawing more realistic stuff.

She is scared of the idea that she could possibly be in the picture with her breasts poping out. The idea of what's happening in this picture is she was initially posing for some pinup picture, but right as the picture was taken she had realized that the bunny suit isn't going to be covering her nipples for much longer, and that caused her focus on that as opposed to looking at the camera for the pose. And thus, technically, ruining the shot.

The whole sudden "unexpected surprise" thing is pretty hard for me to capture though. You have to make the drawing in a way that the the viewer can tell what the character was doing right before what they are currently seen doing.