Zytemarre's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Electric Rat MKII]

B work

I like the style u made it in. The feet lol, to be exact with the feet. It looks like it's standing on hoofs. The original raichu just has a regular rodent's feet, just oversized a bit, so it stands on more than just the tip of the feet. Good job. Keep it up.

Kinsei responds:

I see what you and the others mean.
Raichu kind of had like long rodent/bunny feet, I'll definitely have to fix this if I draw him again.

[katz]

A work

This looks like it should be on a cover of a book dude! She looks real. Maybe add a few random eyes on the background or something. Something tells me theres too much black on the background.

[stone cold]

B+ work

Hey nice work. U made the focus drop dead on her. She stands out like a plasma screen surrounded by regular thick t.v's. It's missing one thing though. It needs a random flash here or there, coming from the paparazzi, at least to show how she's being lighted. Great job. Keep it up.

jagondudo responds:

yes i thought about that for the effect but given who the character is the camera men have been turned to stone. :S but thanks

[Loicizua Story Ver.]

C+ work

Next time try adding the text, explaining wut the character is at the "Author's Comments" section. It gives more room for the drawing. The creativity on her is good. All that's left to fix, well i think so, is the lower stomach. She looks like she's pregnant, unless she is supposed to be? Good job. Keep it up.

SYRSA responds:

Many of my alien girls have big intestines, such as Locuans and Lytvyrians. they're not pregnant.

[yay red pen!]

B+ work

It's good. The pen kinda looks like a gel pen, must of been messy. I like the detail u gave their armor. They must be falling eternally or their missing a platform.

[Berserker Armor]

B+ work

It's good. It needs something else though. Nothing says "im friendly" more than a horrid looking background. Oh that's it! It needs a background to say "im friendly." Did i mention it's good?

[Anybody Needs a Doctor?]

B+ work

Have u ever herd of a Screwed up lefty? Well im one. Wut makes me a screwed up lefty is te following. As a child in 1st grade, i was lefty, born lefty. The school was jacked up by not wanting me to be lefty, so i was told to learn the way of the righty. I learned the way of the righty. I throw with my left, i can catch better with my left. lol! so no baseball glove for me. I cant write lefty perfectly...i can only write righty now. Great job on the art. I like the wall shadow u gae the doc. Keep it up.

[apocalypse chow!]

B+ work

Nice. The style looks like if it was out of a comic strip. The story u gave it sounds like its a god of some sort. I knew that nicolas cage was up to something. Good job. Keep it up.

jouste responds:

thanks for the B+!

[The Begining]

B+ work here

Nice. I want to learn how to paint with anything besides color pencils, pens, and pencils. I notice there is an arrow shape figure or a triangle a little b4 the waterfall on the right ends. Is that supposed to be something or wut? I just noticed that when im not told to look for something, i find things, and when i am told to find something, i dont find things. Great job. Keep it up.

MysticSkillz responds:

That's my watermark.

[Shaymin Salad]

C+ work

Kool joke. I too have not seen the movie, but im familiar with "Shaymin" and "Giratina." I dont know this "zero" guy, but does he really have his hands like that in the movie? or did u just skip the hands part? Good job. Keep it up.

Zelldoom responds:

I Usually prefer 3 finger hands, you will almost see all people i make with just 3 fingers, because i have made my own style of drawing. I really recomment you to see the movie. :)